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My Educational Film by ~tomiris:icontomiris:





staggering for observations
I'm heartily tired now
There's still the most terrible I've beheld
much fatigued
lost the trail
step aside as I regain my berings.
When we awoke to great surprise
shooting without a kill
wet, cold, hungry
a repetition of yesterday
inside to overcome hunger
The whole thing is on the edge
a similar deficiency
it's...
with you every step of the way,
kept as one of their own.
Treated her with kindness
and poorly translated sign language
bring in the band leader now!
still it occurs to them
as it's propelled swifter
the great was reached
provisions bought
came out to see;
everywhere it teemed.
They wanted meat
but
there's nothing to be held
but an adoring screech
shot down by outdated jokes.
Agitated in a shocking matter,
thirty-two slits across their necks
a search for ammunition
thirty-two.
all it takes is thirty-two slits.
and it came together.
and it was decided.
and it was changed.
and the roots of it all
tasted
sweet
(and good)
swollen stomachs
an ungodly sick
pleading to butcher
(hardly a surprise)
hollowed out
a forgotten thought with a soundtrack,
O! The joy!
©2002-2009 ~tomiris
:icontomiris:

Author's Comments

poem written from lines from an educational film. and thoughts inspired by it.

(mad props to whoever can guess what it was about.)

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:iconzpuppetmaster:
That poem was hot. I always enjoy reading your poems. Heh, no props for me, I can't tell what it was about. It was pretty random. I enjoyed reading it regardless, understanding and enjoying are 2 different things to me. Keep writing :) (Smile)
:iconheatherhostage:
Holy shit... that was so cool. This is a wonderful cut-up... it's going to my favorites!... and I don't know what it's about? The movie about the two deaf people on a date? I dunno...

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Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner.
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